Monday, August 12, 2013

ENTRY 2 (NEWS)

Submitted to: Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, tutor

In partial requirement for BEL 313,
Introduction to Critical Thinking,
Test #2 semester 1 2013/2014,
Universiti Teknologi MARA, Seri Iskandar campus, Perak Darul Ridzuan.

Submitted by: Nur Syahira Nordin, 2011220042


6 Formula Kerjaya Impian

I think this is a good article. It gives a lot of information to fresh graduates like me. By reading the article, I manage to get new information as my preparation to get a job in the future. The researcher stated that, unemployed phenomena happen because most of the fresh graduates are too choosy in selecting their career. That is why this article gives much benefit because it comprises the formulas on how to be one of the most favourite candidates during interview.

However, two fallacies were found in this article, which are the appeal to tradition and appeal to ignorance. The fallacies are, “memang sudah menjadi lumrah hanya sebilangan kecil graduan saja yang akan dapat mencapai kerjaya impian mereka” and “PNGK yang rendah akan menjadikan diploma atau ijazah graduan kurang bernilai di pasaran pekerjaan”. These two fallacies show that the article is not a balance one because the readers are questioning its validity due to lack of evidence and authority.


Although the formulas are derived from research, this article still cannot grab the attention of the readers because most of the six formulas are just common rules that are already known by the graduates. Thus, this article will become less interesting to them. Undeniably, this article also gives some ideas for the graduates to start their career in entrepreneurships if they find it hard to get their dream job. In conclusion, other than knowledge, this article also helps graduates to boost their chance in excelling for their dream job.

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